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in the heat of reason
what the hell
       am i doing have i really tried
to reduce you to 'sizzling whale oil
            in the lightbulb of your bird-on-a-wire self-esteem'
and 'your want of justice is a diamond
                   in the rough corroded by mortality'

you who checks my breath for honesty
   you my alcoholic breath my only response
i mean -

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war orcas bite their steel reins to be drowned
in these silences.

if only you knew
words are cheap
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Maya-24 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Not bad
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:iconghostinafog:
ghostinafog Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
fair enough
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
war orcas. there's a new image.
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:iconghostinafog:
ghostinafog Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
i'm hoping the next and last oceanwar is all about that
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
since I am from Texas I am betting on battlecattle.
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puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love this! Very different from anything else I've seen! :D
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:iconghostinafog:
ghostinafog Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
thanks :meow:
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:iconpuddlethecat:
puddlethecat Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome! :) (Smile) 
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