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Literature by Leukippos

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the woman i want to fuck the most
is an abstract concept;
hordes of leeches latch onto my sleeves as
i undress her only
to find a hole and/or bomb after un-
screwing her chest; and i trip
again because she is in my shadow,
slipping, disappearing, reappearing;
as i peel off its black paint, it
sticks to my nails;

not even a woman but a faceless trader
opening a box full of roaches into
my prying face;
as i step into brighter and brighter,
skin-peeling bright light, my shadow
slips through my toes, my brain
slowly processes thoughts
into sticky dimness;
i spin myself
into a cocoon trying to
corner it; meanwhile

she scatters into tiny particles because
she asks to be grasped in an equator-wide
embrace but i'm blind
in a blanket of light, picking
leeches and roaches;

what i want to dissolve into the most
twists back into a spider
at a certain point; there has to be
the least possible
concentration
of sediment -

the pinnacle of human
honesty beyond which one slips
back into a liar's skin.

mine hangs in bloody strands,
the hawk's cloak, the avenger's banner;
sometimes i close my eyes to blink and then in the stillness
the truth i lust after

skitters through the canopy.
mmh.
as we journey deeper into my irresistible stupidity slash naivety combination
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Given 2014-03-29
Unexpected, poignant: the itch by ghostinafog ( Suggested by DanielleIvanova and Featured by neurotype )
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
after your poems i can really only make noises not articulate sentences
youtu.be/F_XaIuw6K6Q?t=7s
you deserve this
so much :heart:
wow
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ghostinafog Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
hah, that was awesome i love you
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i love your ability to dehumanize things. that's what iw anted to say. you are able to take these natural feelings and mechanize them. it's really fucking beautiful and how did i not favorite this the first time ugh i'm stupid
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robojigra Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014   Artist
the itch is a bitch a high pitched trip with hips long legs and lips leeches whip fibs teaching blood in drips
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irelandscotlanditaly Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing.
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ghostinafog Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
thank ye
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ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Well done.
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ghostinafog Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
thank you, comrade.
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drawitout Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
This feels like one of those poems that will stick with me forever.
At the very least, I will definitely be coming back to read again as long as you have it posted here.
Amazing work.
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ghostinafog Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
aw thank you. it feels good not to be forgotten
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